Tuesday, December 2, 2014
INTRO PARA
Fahrenheit 451 is a tale about what happens when an overbearing government takes control of people’s lives, and the repercussions that follow. It shows how technology can take over our lives, how censorship can create an uneducated society, and how inaction can sometimes be the worst action of all.
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Great! I would now expect your essay to follow the sequence of your second sentence. First, technology. Second, censorship. Third, inaction (I am really interested to read about this third point!). You should include one more sentence in your intro paragraph that clarifies how your 3 supporting arguments defend your thesis (Big Government is Bad).
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Nice! Follow Shelby's advice.
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